Wednesday, August 20, 2014

     Baby Lamb

In the morning at school a baby lamb came for Taniela.
Mary came for Taniela. 
The whole class got to see the lamb. They heard a baby noise going maa maa!
It was a cool  day.




By Rohan Menon
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 20, 2014 at 2:10 PM

    Nice writing Rohan. I liked the way that you put the fullstops in the right place and the exclamation mark. Next time you could describe the lamb with more words and say what it's name was. Stormy-Lee.

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  2. AnonymousAugust 20, 2014 at 2:34 PM

    i like when you said who was there .

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    1. Miss Ng :)August 27, 2014 at 9:23 PM

      Don't forget to write your name at the end of your comment anonymous. Miss Ng

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