Monday, September 15, 2014

Restaurant

I went  to    the  restaurant.   There    were   toys    and   there  were  video   games.  I  ate    fish   and    chips    at    the    restaurant.       I      played   with   the    toys.

We    went    back     to     our     rooms   and   then   we  were      going   to  the    hot   pools.   We    went    to     Big   Rock.     It     is   in   Taupo     which   is   far    away.     I   had     a   great     day.
 

By Kaira
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  1. Miss Ng :)September 15, 2014 at 1:44 PM

    Hi Kaira, I liked how you said your story was about far away in Taupo.couIt was clear. But next time you could say where and what Big Rock is.
    From Lucian

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